Monday, June 25, 2012

Without Your Permission

Rating: 4.9
"You are riding on my nerves"
You say, and push me away
With your hands so divine,
But little did you know,
Those firm hands of yours,
With the bright yellow sunshine in them
Was aiding me through the dark
Without your permission

"I don't need you, go away! "
You say, and show me the door
With one of your fingers,
But little did you know,
Those dwarf, tiny fingers
Yet fingers like Aphrodite of yours,
Was filling the gaps of my aching heart
Without your permission
Shouvik Roy
Joyce Rugg 27 June 2012
This is so sweet and beautiful! Nice job :)
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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 27 June 2012
It struck the deep thinnest twig of feel in me, in exquisite recumbent packets! A great heart-smiting write! Keep it up!
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Pheko Motaung 27 June 2012
A really fantastic poem! Thank you very much
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Darkangel Flyfree 26 June 2012
Wow i like this one, definitely can feel the flow in this poem. Keep on writting Shouvik! ! !
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Unwritten Soul 26 June 2012
Elegant write, done it in beautifully flow. I like the playing words the arrangement of really a nicely done by you..keep it up for more! _Unwritten Soul
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Tiffany M... 25 June 2012
I really do like this piece; it's sweet! :) I wonder what relationship the speaker has to the child... Mother? Father? Aunt? That's just a question I was wondering... This really is beautiful.
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Neela Nath Das 25 June 2012
Wow! Nothing matters if a person loves a lady like this.It makes me remember, The Last Ride Together Of Robert Browning..Love is here pure, divine but unrequited.
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Kasia Fedyk 25 June 2012
Shouvik, I am speechless it is beautiful in the most Divine way. A recognized light that heals from another they may not know it themselves but tin this poem you have described how it may happen and its amazing! ! ! ! Bravo to you Shouvik you are feeling it. Love and light
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