Wake Up....Can You...? ? ....My Love Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

Wake Up....Can You...? ? ....My Love

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I wait here to see you waking up tonight
and walk with me
under this moonlight
can yu..?
my love

I need you to share my tears and pain
like a flower in the rain
Am so alone
and you know

miss your smile
miss your care
why you left me so...?

the love we shared
the fun we had
all been washed like a dew


can you see my tears...?
my life with fears
where you been washed too....?

I wait here, to hear your words tonight
can you...?
my love

I hear your words
can feel your touch
but I know its not true

your pretty smile
still in my eyes
all my days gone blue

I need you to share my tears and pain
like a flower in the rain
Am so alone
and you know

I wait here, to see you waking up tonight
and walk with me
under this moonlight
can yu...?
my love............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 16 July 2009

wow..what a write! really sweet...growing more and more poetic... a passionate touch through your words... very impressive...and pictured out a very wonderful sight... under the moonlight....by the seashore too? smiless I love this write...very moving...so light...like a gentle caress of the passing breeze.. smells so fresh and cool... 10+++++ lovelots, maia

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Lady Grace 15 July 2009

more poeitic..these are nicely written..short lines can make the poem beautiful..the thought is very nice.. wake up, come with me lets share stories for the night laughters had make the moon wake and take note, , the moon smiles too with us, , ...grace

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Winnie Angel 14 July 2009

Wow this a wonderful heart speaking for a wonderful sweeheart..lines of deep love and longing to that time when the depth and warmth was high..still waiting to go to the same time and feel of love...........Winnie

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