United Forever.... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

United Forever....

Rating: 5.0


People admired me whn I was born
and every hand tried to hold me in their arm
even... before I ask, they gave me sweets
and I got plenty of kisses on my cheeks
years rolled on with fun and care
till I was a teen people admired me as if I am a cute hare
when the day I came across you in my life
I really felt how sweet your and you became my everloving wife
never I felt lonely till I had you at my side
cos you kept your arms open always for me wide
when the day you left me alone and went for a deep sleep
first time I felt lonely beside your grave and I started to weep
you used to hug me tight cos your scared at nights
now I don't know how you gonna be alone sleeping here without lights
with no heart to leave you alone, I just slept over your grave
people found me motionless beside you the next day
though sadness filled the entire ground below us
I got my smile back... cos from now, I know we are united again for ever...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 20 November 2008

Nothing like that comfy lovey

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

now I don't know how you gonna be alone sleeping here without lights with no heart to leave you alone, I just slept over your grave people found me motionless beside you the next day Rachel Ann Butler

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Winnie Angel 12 February 2009

'i got my smile back... cos from now, I know we are united again for ever... ' touching lines.....beautiful one........

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Linda Moore 07 January 2009

Bittersweet Saddnes, Beauty in your writing....10

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brittany 03 December 2008

wow that is so good. gosh you have amazing talent. i wish i could write such powerful lines like that. but you are 23? and that means you have had more practice. i am determined to get there some day! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! but again you are really good and i enjoy reading your work.

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Anjali Sinha 26 November 2008

this poem jus touchhhhhhhhhhhhhed me ++++++++++10 regards anjali

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