The Moon's Whisper Poem by Ayatullah Nurjati

The Moon's Whisper

Rating: 4.8

The moon whispered to the sea,
'Tell me your deepest secrets.'
And the sea, with its waves dancing,
Revealed tales of lost ships,
Of sailors' dreams and mermaids' songs.

The moon listened, its silver glow
Caressing the water's surface.
It heard stories of love and longing,
Of storms that raged and calms that soothed,
Of tides that pulled hearts together.

In return, the moon shared its own secrets:
How it watched over lovers,
How it witnessed births and farewells,
How it wove threads of destiny
Across the vast expanse of night.

And so, the moon and the sea conversed,
Two celestial beings bound by mystery,
Their whispers echoing through time,
Creating tides of wonder and reflection,
Guiding hearts toward the infinite horizon.

As dawn approached, the moon retreated,
Leaving a trail of silver on the water.
The sea sighed, holding its secrets close,
And the night surrendered to the day,
But the memory of their conversation lingered,
A timeless dance between moon and sea.

©ayatullahnurjati @poemhutner.com

Pantai Pasir Putih Pulau Peucang, July 13,2024

The Moon's Whisper
Wednesday, July 17, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: silver,water,sea,timeless,dance,wonder,horizon,reflection,destiny,moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The moon always determines the tides and tides as if they had never cheated on each other and will always be faithful as long as the earth continues to orbit in this solar system.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vika Putri Amelia 24 July 2024

this such a amazing poem i've read. 😍

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Andra Aryaputra Andra 24 July 2024

This poem beautifully captures the enchanting dialogue between the moon and the sea. The imagery is vivid and evocative, painting a serene picture of their mystical exchange

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Goodd

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Alesia Dahniar Alesia 24 July 2024

wow, amazingg🔥

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M.Samsul Bachri Samsul 25 July 2024

This poem beautifully captures the enchanting dialogue between the moon and the sea. The imagery is vivid and evocative, painting a serene picture of their mystical exchange

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Moon's Whisper by Ayatullah Nurjati is a poem about longing and connection with celestial imagery and subtlety, conveying emotional depth, quiet power, and inner reflection.

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sheila dinarya 11 October 2024

The title hints at celestial connections and intimate messages, while the work delves into themes of cycles, hidden truths, and femininity associated with the moon.

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wafiq wafiq 11 October 2024

The Moon's Whisper poem by Ayatullah Nurjati delves into spirituality, longing, and material-spiritual connection.

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Najwa Maulidia Najwa 11 October 2024

The title hints at celestial connections and intimate messages, while the work delves into themes of cycles, hidden truths, and femininity associated with the moon.

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Adinda Samira 11 October 2024

'The Moon's Whisper' by Ayatullah Nurjati uses the moon as a symbol of enlightenment to guide readers on their spiritual journeys and connect them to the divine through nature's beauty.

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