Sheldon Allen Saluta

Wanton Profusion Of Life

Standing in the middle of nowhere
I should have to blare
To emancipate the pains inside of me
And move freely, facing the sun with glee

Standing in the middle of sorrow
The road is narrow
But I have to across the ocean of mist
To have a great resemblance of main list

Walking in the milieu of wonder
I found my mender
Reforms and heals the wounds that once been cajoled
Living again, feeling like a new hole

Walking in the milieu of greatness
I feel like I’m blessed
From the storms that came to my life, but I’m here
Writing this poem with gratitude, not mere

Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 4, 2010

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  • Lydia Wijnerman (4/14/2010 7:09:00 AM)

    Nice but a bit melancholic. But we must admit that it is the truth of life sometimes. God bless you.

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  • Tanner Geldart (4/11/2010 1:32:00 PM)

    I get from this that every life has joy and sorrow but you should focus on the joy over sorrow... Good write

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  • Sandra MartyresSandra Martyres (4/11/2010 5:50:00 AM)

    A good write Sheldon, you bring out the difficult situations very well in this well crafted piece on the profusion of life..Thanks for inviting me to read your work

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  • Prince Obed de la CruzPrince Obed de la Cruz (4/10/2010 3:14:00 AM)

    awwww.... so good... love it

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  • Kranthi Pothineni (4/6/2010 2:36:00 PM)

    Lovely piece.It truly speaks about the truth of life. Keep writing.

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  • Eyan Desir (4/5/2010 12:39:00 PM)

    Very nice
    it was a pleasure to read

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  • Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/4/2010 5:17:00 PM)

    a wonderful write. you maintained the form and you gave a good poem

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  • Fay SlimmFay Slimm (4/4/2010 10:34:00 AM)

    This describes well the profusion life can present Sheldon and you have, expecially in the first two verses, captured that feel of angst when there becomes too much of too much. Well written insightful piece.

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (4/4/2010 9:52:00 AM)

    A poem that speaks to the complexity of life's circumstances that one has to endure or overcoming....learn to change the things that's worth changing or learn to adjust self to the unchanged. I like the poem Sheldon -this 10

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  • May WitwitMay Witwit (4/4/2010 9:32:00 AM)

    I think its good. Time does heal the wounds but we have no patience. When we look back at the old scars memories are revived and sometimes painful all over again. Thanks for sharing

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