War - 12 (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

War - 12 (Haiku)

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War is a dark chalk that strikes

Through the bright, white, age-old sentences

Written on human mind.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 November 2017

It is sad that, our minds as Human Beings turn out this Way. Only with hatred and war! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 27 August 2017

War is a dark chalk that strikes Through the bright, white, age-old sentences Written on human mind. War is a dark chalk putting off the values of heritage. Nicely written haiku. 10++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 26 August 2017

War is a dark chalk that strikes Through the bright, white, age-old sentences Written on human mind. A black paint on our heritage...true. 10++.

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Sabita Sahoo 26 August 2017

War is a dark chalk that strikes Through the bright, white, age-old sentences Written on human mind. Beautiful haiku. The chalk strikes through the bright sentences of heritage. 10++.

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Anita Aparajita Das 23 August 2017

War is a dark chalk that strikes Through the bright, white, age-old sentences Written on human mind. What a nice analogy Subhas! Thanks.10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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