War - 22 (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

War - 22 (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


War is a bleeding wound

On the supple skin of Our Earth

The shorter it stays, the better.

Thursday, August 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity,war,war and peace,war memories,warfare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2017

Beast haiku on war and humanity. Brief but meaningful and beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks Sir, Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 August 2017

War is a bleeding wound On the supple skin of Our Earth The shorter it stays, the better. War is a disfiguring evil force that burns the suppleness of a nation.. Nice. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks Sanjukta, Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 25 August 2017

War is a bleeding wound On the supple skin of Our Earth The shorter it stays, the better. Yes this bleeding wound is so fatal for a nation. It must be healed. 10++ for this haiku. Thanks poet.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks Rini, Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Sabita Sahoo 25 August 2017

War is a bleeding wound On the supple skin of Our Earth The shorter it stays, the better. Even a short span of war can cause much harm. Thank you for the sharing of the haiku.10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks Sabita, Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Anita Aparajita Das 25 August 2017

War is a bleeding wound On the supple skin of Our Earth The shorter it stays, the better. Yes, war destroys the supple and delicate minds of our world. It should be as short as possible. 10 for this nice haiku.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks Neetu, Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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