War - 23 (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

War - 23 (Haiku)

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War is a gust of air

Carrying dust of hatred and deadly heat

For a caravan of peace lovers.

Thursday, August 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: humanism,war,war and peace,war memories,warfare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sanjukta Sahoo 26 August 2017

War is a gust of air Carrying dust of hatred and deadly heat For a caravan of peace lovers. Beautiful haiku. War puts dust of hot hatred. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 25 August 2017

War is a gust of air Carrying dust of hatred and deadly heat For a caravan of peace lovers. War is a spray of hot fatal dust of hatred onto the peace loving people across borders. War has to be avoided at all cost. Thanks for it.10+

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks , Thank you dear for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Sabita Sahoo 25 August 2017

War is a gust of air Carrying dust of hatred and deadly heat For a caravan of peace lovers. Yes war spits harmful hot dust of hatred on peace lovers. Nice haiku.10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks, Thank you dear Sabita for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Anita Aparajita Das 25 August 2017

War is a gust of air Carrying dust of hatred and deadly heat For a caravan of peace lovers. Beautiful comparison. War spreads hot dust of hatred on the caravan of peace processes. Thanks poet. 10+ for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 December 2017

Thanks Neetu, Thank you dear so much for this encouraging remarks here. Please read some more and comment.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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