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War (5) ....

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About my loved Mom, as she was and still is for me, perpetually....

she is as strong and firm
as the Notre Dame

spiritful and and powerful
constant pleasure in her work

she is slender and lovely
her eyes have so much beauty

great is her authority
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Thursday, June 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: ode to my mother
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
despite her health
she wanted to bear kids
my bro and I are grateful perpetually
to God, to our beloved daddy and to she
my eternal loved mommy....


with caring love
your only daughter
who loves you still immensely.

Thursday 6 June 2019
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2019

An excellent poem! My son was asked to write a poem on war he failed as he is an essayist! If I would have read this poem earlier, I could have downloaded this wonderful poem and handed over to him to have some encouragement! Thank you so much for composing such a beautiful work of value and substance!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 November 2019

Thank you so much, Dillip, that you intended to use this War(5) as an example to have your son got some encouragement. I feel honoured, truly. Great pity that you just missed this poem. Next time better. If so, please let me know. Thank you for the kindest compliments, dear poet. God Bless you in Abundance.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 June 2019

Loving and precise! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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