War - Senryu Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

War - Senryu

Rating: 4.6


A crowd of sorrows
Brings carnage that drives people
To its lowest lows.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 16 March 2022

A war can never have a better definition than this one. How wonderfully you summed up about the war in this Senryu 👏 full stars...

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Sandra Feldman 16 March 2022

War, a true and heartbreaking reality, so excellently described and felt n these great 3 lines.

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Sandra Feldman 16 March 2022

So true, so true! No animal would do. what we have done and do to each other thru war.

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Anjandev Roy 15 March 2022

.........lowest lows.......brilliant....thank u, dear poetess....

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 March 2022

Thought provoking write. Yeah it is true.

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Sunny Quagmire 26 August 2025

A superb summary of the ghastliness of war. Thank you for sharing!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 March 2022

Truth spelt out wonderfully in a few words, succinct yet carries all the features of a war, full stars

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

Excellently expressed! .. Hearts that are ever so deeply filled with tears! .. Definite! .....5 Stars! ..+++++

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Words Out Of The Mind 18 March 2022

Rat, rat, tat a tat....machine gun fire

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

War spells the end of the world for many lives. The dictator's mind, whose heart is taken over, can not be read…

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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