Wandering Soul Poem by Rini Shibu

Wandering Soul

Rating: 5.0


Oh my soul
Why you wander alone
Nothing you will find
Or gain from this world
Stay in my body
I will sing to you a story
You wont get peace
Unless in me you find space
To make a kingdom of own
And there you will be crowned

Monday, December 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 17 December 2018

A very nice poem. Flow is amazing. Loved the simple way you spill your thoughts on papers. Thanks for sharing.

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Lamar Cole 17 December 2018

This is a very wonderful poem about wandering soul.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 January 2019

the soul you believe in is pure magnetism but stay within it till you can smile You have taken off like an eagle ahead of me by miles 91 thou i see be happy keep smiling Rini daughter that ye be

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Glen Kappy 06 January 2019

Hi, Rini! It’s been a while, and I hope this finds you well in all ways. I was revisiting a poem of my own when I saw your comment and picture. Reminded of you, I came to your poems and read this one first in which you address your own soul. This strikes me as I am in the process of memorizing Psalm 103 which begins, Bless the Lord, O my soul... Interesting how these things happen, eh? Wishing you the best today and always, Glen

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 January 2019

Stay in my body! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 19 December 2018

Wow so well thought and written, Simply superb 10+++, It reminded me a very famous song... Mann re tu kahe na dheer dhare, O nirmohi moh na jane jinka moh kare.....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 December 2018

You wont get peace Unless in me you find space To make a kingdom of own And there you will be crowned.........so touching and true. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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