~was It Just A Dream? ~ Poem by Kali Abyss

Dont speak any english? Pish Posh....This was BEAUTIFULY written....My heart broke with you! ! ! !

You are doing just fine. Practice is the answer....so please keep writing.

This may seem to be a very simple poem but the feelings that have gone into this one are by no measure simple. A very poignant write. arya.

Soft and sad. Very nice poem. Love it.

This is a very deeply heartfelt poem, Kali, clearly one written in the ashes of the heartbreak that so often accompanies first love. In such situations, many teens turn to writing, particularly poetry, to express their emotions and quite often, become poets eventually. This fine poem shows you have a talent for expression, one that should not be overlooked or cast away. One of the great things about first love is that it teaches us how to deal with love and relationships, and prepares one to better understand love and relationships for the next time one comes along. One of the great things about life and being young, is that you will surely fall in love again, and probably with a better and more sincere person. Carl.

Very heartfelt verses Kali! Beautifully expressed feelings ~Besa

So so beautiful. I don't know why.. and this happened to me for the first time.. but I heard a melody in my head that went with it the first time I read it. :) Really well written. Love it

You said that Forever -On that night I cried! - You said that together -Why you hurt me, why? ! - a heart feeling dream and yes dreams are sometime nearer to actual situations but dreams are dreams and thanks your dream was just a dream..liked this poem and written well..well done

Very touching composition. Love it with 10+++

Seperation from the adored one is indeed a very difficult moment and one always wishes that this moment would have been a dream and nothing else.......You have described these feelings in a really nice poem...........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer