We Live Forever Poem by Reshma Ramesh

We Live Forever

Rating: 4.8


When you bring your
Lips to mine,
My eyes close in
Blissful rhyme,
When you slip your hands
Into my feminine
Contours, my heart skips
A beat, in the embrace
Of the your love, I grasp
Your manhood locked
In my confines.
I am your temptress
And beside your
Soulful eyes my darling
With the dagger
Of love in my bosom
We shall part,
In the depths of the oceans,
In the redness of the roses,
In the memories of lovers,
Shall we live forever

(A sequel to poem Forever by poet Sadiqullah Khan)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 10 October 2008

Take me thou by storm When my tears flow on thy cheek Love is like a rose in bloom From street to street is spreading The story of our acquaintance Written have thou my name on thy bosom With blood I write thy name on my heart Never to forget thee in the world hereafter Hold thy hand for my lips to kiss The divinity of the being bathed in love Hold thy glance for my heart in raptures In silence I tread with the eloquence of the one Conqueror of the world is he who hath Put the sword in front of thy love For I forget wars and anguish of multitude When thou hath cast that cruel glance on me

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Shimon Weinroth 10 October 2008

indeed you will, with such passionate poetry, we are enery wihich becomes one with the cosmos 10

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Sadiqullah Khan 11 October 2008

I was in a spell, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,10++

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June Feir-Cruz 22 October 2008

You are a prolific poet, Reshma. I am so proud to be your friend as well.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 October 2008

Commendable work, young lady...Resplendent image work...tastefully sensual....mellifluous structural movement....Keep that pen pumpin'! ~ F j R ~ __2008__

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 October 2008

Romantic and sexy poem indeed! Bravo Reshma!

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Greenwolfe 1962 13 October 2008

A woman's tender words of warmth. So soothing to a man. These are the enchantments only a woman can bring to intimate moments. Expressed and presented as well as can be done. Recommended reading. A fine talent for using words. Skilled wordsmith. My respect to you. GW62

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Kesav Easwaran 12 October 2008

'of the your love' - 'of love yours' - would be better there...good romantic write...beautifully expressive...Ten for you Reshma...

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Reshma Ramesh

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