Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 437,827 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

We Promised - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

We promise so many things before marriage
It is very energetic and very young age
It is opening of new leaf on page
Life provides opportunity to live on stage

When you have strongest bond to survive?
No one can stop you from efforts to revive
It is an honest try to spend and live
It is definitely strong union to believe

The time is passing on like water in river
Water may dry out not with all but fewer
It may be indication of love lost game
It will result into very big shame

The moment you become from two to four
How come relation turns suddenly sour?
Why difficulties from all the directions pour?
Fault can ever be mine or yours

Wise men always preferred to say
what else can be good in a day?
When everybody has to earn and dearly pay
why life journey can be turned into bad tour?

I am your better half,
Don’t treat me as small calf,
I can be your inspiration and strength,
Prepared to share and go to any length,

We have turned hell into heaven,
All odds converted into even,
It is time now to reap the fruit,
Suddenly it may turn into flames and glut,

Why I am left alone for a while?
When I was prepared to go an extra mile,
Worries on face still wore deserted smile,
Stayed at home but not in exile,

I shall serve you to the end,
Golden opportunity God has sent,
Never disrespect and always mend,
Advise others with appeal as friend

Let us prove and show that we are ideal couple,
Our world doesn't stand on sand or rubble,
We can build not castle but at least simple nest,
Lead the life simple and always the best,

I shall remain always yours and holy,
No mistakes on my part or committing folly,
Dedicated and devoted still not owned as wholly,
never consider me stupid or silly?

Don’t ruin it ever it for simple reason,
autumn may come and pass off like any other season,
Let us bury the past and have fresh start,
resolve to remain together and never to part

You still decided to stay away
You were firm wanted your say
It was some misunderstanding that force you
It is not possible for you to come through

We have shared many grim moments
You heard me quietly without any comments
You were in confusion as to what should be next step?
I was there to guide you not to fall in trap

Comments about We Promised by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Binayak Dutta (6/5/2016 11:53:00 PM)

    very nice and lyrical (Report) Reply

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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (6/5/2016 11:44:00 PM)

    Seems a normal thing as people reach their destination little by little, day by day. What is important is understanding from both. Nice write and congrats for the positioning. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (6/5/2016 4:24:00 PM)

    Relationship of man and a woman is the most complicated one. It freezes to thaw again, it grows to become mature, and it always brings out new determination for it to succeed. Congratulation for a member poem choice. It has been written with all the sincerity. (Report) Reply

  • B.m. Biswas (6/5/2016 1:48:00 PM)

    First of all a big congratulation...a member poet......your poems deserve...
    I am your fan..
    Your writing pleases me..
    I need your 'advice with appappeal as friend'........for my poems if they may be termed as poems......thank you..
    Wish you a smooth life.
    (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (6/5/2016 11:06:00 AM)

    Congratulations, Hasmukh, on having this selected as member poem of the day!
    Be well.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/5/2016 3:58:00 AM)

    With all odds coverted into even! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 16, 2010

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