Wedding Vows Of A Wife Poem by louis rams

Wedding Vows Of A Wife

Rating: 5.0


i give you my heart as a token of my love
for JESUS filled it from above.

i searched my whole life through
for a man such as you.
i saw in you all that i desired
and you set my heart on fire.

i see that you are a caring and a non violent man
and praised me when i took a stand.
on all that i believe and feel to be true.
that's the reason i have fallen in love with you.

so on this beautiful day in my life
i consent to be your wife.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 23 June 2009

See from other side is possible only for a heart full of love. Very good thought and write to ponder.

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Christine Kerr 22 June 2009

(And praise me when I took a stand.) This sentence tells so much, Respect, sharing, individualness, caring and consideration. I could never understand 'Two hearts become one.' but if it came from this perspective it all makes sense. Hats off to you Louis for seeing both sides 10++

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Sandra Fowler 22 June 2009

The bride displays a beautiful spirit. Very touching. 10, of course. Kind regards, Sandra

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lovely write...actually we here in india have various vows which we don't understand...this seems from the heart

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