Weep Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Weep

Rating: 5.0


Broken hearts do bleed. Deep as
the deep red sea's. As wave's
wash over me, and the sea gulls
cry their lonesome melody. Time
washes on the beach. Sound of
the fog horn, distant meek. As
the night skies began to speak.
And the moons tears, weep.

Thursday, February 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships,sorrows
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2022

I liked this poignant poem about broken heart. 'Sound of the fog horn', night skies among others are powerful muscles to the skeleton of your poem.....top score!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 February 2018

Broken heart feels lonesome and helpless. He feels the nature's songs unusual. He often weeps in sorrows. His realtionships with other become fade. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 February 2018

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Such A Considerate Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Has Such A Beauty That Speaks Powerfully Of Nature, Creation, And Gods Spirit Deep! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Reading! ! ! ! !

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