Sea-sons showered pains,
Injured knee on trousers stains,
Still thanks if it rains.
Fine rain washed greenery,
Leaves from nature's refinery,
Poet paints a scenery.
A wet summer dressing,
The naughty rains so tressing,
For me a wet blessing.
A pleasant rainy night,
Things look so lovely and bright,
No pains of day light.
Titillated eyes smile,
Write in her glassy profile,
In rains she's fragile.
A subject of many poems, rain seems to have a universal affect on man's psyche. Well penned my friend
A wet summer dressing, The naughty rains so tressing, For me a wet blessing. well done..a poem as per climate...nice written..
A beautiful write on rains.......................................
Lovely poem.... It flows like small rivulets on window panes during a torrential down pour!
Sea sons showered pains..The beginning itself very dramatic and encourages the reader to read further..clearly written poem on rain..Thank you Akhtar
Rain evokes emotion.Rain just affect every one.A beautiful poem of rain. To quote from the poem- - - 'Titillated eyes smile Write in her glassy profile In rains she is fragile '
Fine rain washed greenery, Leaves from nature's refinery, ...painting of poet the scenery of nature to wash out pain of mind and fill happiness in mind is definitely interesting step. Writing in glassy profile rain withstands with dream and reality...10
Excellent rain-drenched landscape arising out of the poet's lyrical words along with giving vent to poet's own delicate feelings. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem, I like the rhyming part of this poem, to me it gave the same feeling like raindrops are falling on my head....10++++