Well Spotted… Bri Edwards Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Well Spotted… Bri Edwards

Rating: 5.0


Bri has such a beady eye,
He picks out my mistakes,
A comma here a comma there,
Is that really what it takes?
To be the perfect poet,
To shine amongst the stars,
I forget to dot the i's again,
It won't do any harm.
I'm always up for comments,
So thanks again kind sir,
I'm pretty new to this old game,
And life's a learning curve.


Jayne Louise Davies

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As I always say. I welcome any comments from you Bri :) That's not saying i always listen :) I'm a stubborn old bird! Lol x
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 29 March 2023

Carry on, Jayne! Pay no attention to Bri, though he's a good guy, with his beady eye.

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Jayne Louise Davies 29 March 2023

I don't Kim : ) I just take it on the chin : ) lol x

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

4 stars for poem plus 1 more for mentioning my name.....twice! ! ! TOTAL = 5. : ) bri

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Jayne Louise Davies 29 March 2023

Well thank you Bri : ) No mistakes? I must be improving with age : ) lol x

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

Ah, yes. life IS a 'learnig curve', one at times difficult following/negotiating. If it becomes TOO difficult, I may begin, 'life's curve', to be hating! ! !

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Jayne Louise Davies 31 March 2023

Thank you everyone for your comments x Much appreciated : ) : ) xx

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Richard Wlodarski 30 March 2023

2) Poets writing in a conventional style can benefit from Bri's constructive criticism. However, a free verse writer/poet like Jack Kerouac would have been stopped in his tracks had he adhered to that type of constructive criticism. Free verse should not feel restictive!

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Richard Wlodarski 30 March 2023

If the mistakes are unintended, then that kind of constructive criticism is GREAT. However, if the mistakes are intended, and/or one is writing free verse, then that constructive criticism can hinder the poet/poetess.

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D.N. Rebb 30 March 2023

I'm wondering if Bob Dylan is arrogant enough to think he's a good singer

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Poetic Sky 29 March 2023

SOme people have bad habit of poking their dirty nose everywhere, keep going and learn from the masters not from the jokers.

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