We're Just Children Poem by Richard Wlodarski

We're Just Children

Rating: 5.0


We're just children
Innocence lost
Life so betrayed
In the playground

Tuesday, January 24, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 25 January 2023

Perfect! ! ! liked it.

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Richard Wlodarski 27 January 2023

THX very much, Dr. Nehal!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 January 2023

Thank you for sharing the lessons of life, dear Richard. God bless.....10

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2023

And thank you, Geeta for sharing the lessons of life of yourself, and others, through your eloquent poetry. Many THX for including my poem in your favourites. God bless you, my poetess friend!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 January 2023

Let us remain like a child, innocent and ever cheerful, even if the playground betrays itself.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2023

A beautifully poetic response, Geeta. Thank You!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 25 January 2023

natural innocence wins at last but manipulated innocence never meets its goal!

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Richard Wlodarski 25 January 2023

Mahtab, your responses are not only very positive, but also, so poetric. Love them! THX so very much for the time and effort that you put into them. That means a lot to me!

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 January 2023

Yeah, it is true. Nice write.

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Richard Wlodarski 24 January 2023

THX, Anil for reading and commenting positively. All The Best in 2023!

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