Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 418,795 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

What Can I Do - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

If my parent doesn't listen to me
What can I do?

If my teacher doesn't teach me
What can I do?

If my friends don't love me
What can I do?

If my neighbours don't co-operate me
What can I do?

Oh God! lead me
Have me the ideas
To solve the problems.

Let me have tolerance power,
Have me courage
To fight against injustice.

Let me follow nonviolence
Provide me patience
And have me love
Having nothing to get instead.

Topic(s) of this poem: love, spiritual

Form: Didactic Poetry


Comments about What Can I Do by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (12/3/2018 4:26:00 AM)

    I love the composition of this poem! The questions posed are effective and memorable in this poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (3/13/2017 6:43:00 AM)

    Patience. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Clarence PrinceClarence Prince (2/6/2017 9:54:00 AM)

    Even when all forsake us;
    God will considers us with love and with peace,
    for He creates us for a purpose!
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  • Ryson DsouzaRyson Dsouza (2/3/2017 8:17:00 AM)

    Yes! ! These are the Question that comes in ones mind.. and reading your Poem answers that all..
    This is a very Unique way to convey.. Have courage Have patience..which will enhance tolerance power & Most Important... Treat Situations with Love... Thanks for Sharing... Its a wonderful learning from you Sir...10/10
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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 3, 2017

Poem Edited: Friday, January 24, 2020


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