Christopher's Dead

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What I Wish I Told Her - Poem by Christopher's Dead

It's a large world out there,
If I never see it, there's nothing I'd undo,
Because who needs the world,
Nothing else matters, when I can be here with you.
You have inspired me,
To open my eyes, see life in a new light,
I now believe in true beauty,
I know why every morning, the sun shines so bright.
Why your life's been surrounded by disaster,
No one can explain, it's not anyone's decision,
And keeping you safe while we're together,
Is not just important to me, but my life's ambition.
I know you hate being protected,
I never thought you couldn't take care of yourself at all,
Just know I want to help,
Even if it's nothing, I can't take seeing you fall.
Sometimes you have fear,
But you're still stronger and braver, far above,
Any person I've ever known,
After all you've been through, you're still willing to love.
You make me the best person I can be,
I sometimes think it could never be good enough, it's true,
But I will always keep trying,
To become a better person, just for you.


Comments about What I Wish I Told Her by Christopher's Dead

  • (1/3/2011 10:13:00 PM)

    Very lovely poem. The girl must have lost a heck of alot if she really had a man that cared this much. I think this is outstanding Christopher and you are an amazing person and poet :) (Report)Reply

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  • (6/6/2010 12:19:00 AM)

    you shouldnt have to change your self for no one (Report)Reply

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  • (1/26/2010 9:44:00 AM)

    awwww..this is a gud poem shows love and how you feel... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2010 7:57:00 PM)

    Awwww....I can relate to this....beautiful write....displays so much of love and security...of what you really feel... (Report)Reply

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  • Lexi Zamora (12/20/2009 12:25:00 AM)

    i really like this one its so true and i really admire that you express your emtions so freely (Report)Reply

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  • moon dust (11/28/2009 10:27:00 PM)

    i wish for you life without pain
    you are too a spirit being in a human world
    don't let your spirit die
    let it ripen on the vine in the sun
    you r beautiful
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  • (11/28/2009 8:17:00 PM)

    this i a really good poem. keep up hte work (Report)Reply

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  • (11/25/2009 4:08:00 PM)

    okay..just keep trying to be better, but if she doesnt lobe u, all the changes u'll do wont matter with her........i tried that b4...anyways., best wishes :) (Report)Reply

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  • (11/16/2009 6:50:00 PM)

    this is really good. i no how u probably feel cuz i was in a similiar situation. its very heartfelt. and as my dear friend kelsea says i dont no of anything more perfect.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • The devils Girl (11/14/2009 7:01:00 PM)

    omg you are going to make me cry. i have never read anything more perfect. i love this so much. it makes me want to call my brother and have him here so i can cry into his arms and tell him all that i hate about life. it makes feel so different. if you dont give this to ur ex i will have to find it and give it to her myself. it is so powerful. if she doesnt love you she is crazy. i love it in every way possible. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/11/2009 5:05:00 PM)

    OH..!
    This poem is so sweet! ! (:
    10+

    Jenna
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 11, 2009



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