It's a large world out there,
If I never see it, there's nothing I'd undo,
Because who needs the world,
Nothing else matters, when I can be here with you.
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awwww..this is a gud poem shows love and how you feel...
Awwww....I can relate to this....beautiful write....displays so much of love and security...of what you really feel...
i really like this one its so true and i really admire that you express your emtions so freely
i wish for you life without pain you are too a spirit being in a human world don't let your spirit die let it ripen on the vine in the sun you r beautiful
this i a really good poem. keep up hte work
okay..just keep trying to be better, but if she doesnt lobe u, all the changes u'll do wont matter with her........i tried that b4...anyways., best wishes :)
this is really good. i no how u probably feel cuz i was in a similiar situation. its very heartfelt. and as my dear friend kelsea says i dont no of anything more perfect.10+
Very lovely poem. The girl must have lost a heck of alot if she really had a man that cared this much. I think this is outstanding Christopher and you are an amazing person and poet :)