Wednesday, November 11, 2009

What I Wish I Told Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's a large world out there,
If I never see it, there's nothing I'd undo,
Because who needs the world,
Nothing else matters, when I can be here with you.
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Christopher's Dead
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Sarah Marie 03 January 2011

Very lovely poem. The girl must have lost a heck of alot if she really had a man that cared this much. I think this is outstanding Christopher and you are an amazing person and poet :)

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Jessy Villa 06 June 2010

you shouldnt have to change your self for no one

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awwww..this is a gud poem shows love and how you feel...

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 25 January 2010

Awwww....I can relate to this....beautiful write....displays so much of love and security...of what you really feel...

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Lexi Zamora 20 December 2009

i really like this one its so true and i really admire that you express your emtions so freely

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moon dust 28 November 2009

i wish for you life without pain you are too a spirit being in a human world don't let your spirit die let it ripen on the vine in the sun you r beautiful

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this i a really good poem. keep up hte work

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The Lost.. 25 November 2009

okay..just keep trying to be better, but if she doesnt lobe u, all the changes u'll do wont matter with her........i tried that b4...anyways., best wishes :)

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Nicole Gehrman 16 November 2009

this is really good. i no how u probably feel cuz i was in a similiar situation. its very heartfelt. and as my dear friend kelsea says i dont no of anything more perfect.10+

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Jenna Jones 11 November 2009

OH..! This poem is so sweet! ! (: 10+ Jenna

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