What If The Sea Were To Talk To Me ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

What If The Sea Were To Talk To Me ~

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If the sea were to talk to me,
I'd listen closely to its song,
to catch the tales it wants to tell,
of the life it carries along.

Perhaps it would share tales of whales,
and of dolphins dancing with glee,
or of tempests that shook its soul,
leaving chaos and debris.

The sea may speak of hidden pearls,
and treasures hidden in its heart,
and of pirates who dared to loot,
craving fortunes that never part.

But the sea may also mourn,
of sailors lost and never found,
and of all the storms it has weathered,
And the wreckage washed aground.

What if the sea could talk to me,
what secrets would it disclose?
could it whisper of creatures strange,
and of distant ships it did steal and froze?

What If The Sea Were To Talk To Me ~
Monday, June 5, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: imagination,imagery,sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dennis Ryan 05 June 2023

This is an interesting poem, but it would prove of more interest to me if you wrote about heat the sea says directly to you, and how you respond.

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Martinez Salotori 06 June 2023

Dear friend, once I went to interview sea, don't ask me what reply I got...SUNAMI...

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Very beautifully and interestingly presented. " the sea may also mourn, of sailors lost and never found, " captivating style, good rhyme scheme…

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Rajan T Renganathan 06 June 2023

Not all creatures are lucky enough like humans to speak and express their feelings. They serve their purpose and just sync with the nature. Articulate poem from your pen.

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Poetic Sky 06 June 2023

So much to speak about humans and nature. I am sure Sea will have more than that to reveal.70% of the land is covered by the Water/Sea

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David Wood 05 June 2023

The sea has many stories to tell, particularly the number of wrecks I have dived, they may even cry. Great poem Asim.

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