What The Heck? Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

What The Heck?

Rating: 5.0

There was once a young man from Quebec
whose sad life was a terrible wreck.
After causing much grief
as a thug and a thief,
he was caught and strung up by his neck.

Monday, May 20, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: grief,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was recently challenged to write a limerick and was given the first line. This is what I came up with.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 June 2024

Excellent limerick, Kim. Brilliantly crafted and executed.

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Bri Edwards 06 June 2024

OK! I made it a favorite.

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Smoky Hoss 01 June 2024

Obviously the Canadian Mounties always get their man! Great poem!

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Kim Barney 06 June 2024

Many thanks for the comment, Smoky.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 20 May 2024

Great limerick, Kim! You should write more of them.

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Kim Barney 25 May 2024

Thanks, Ron. I miss Wes Vogler and his many limericks.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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