M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 165,729 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

What To Do! Limerick - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A wise man was thirsty and found a glass of water
but the water was contaminated with poison twitter,
if he drinks would die
and if he don't he would die
and he decided to live forever.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, philosophical , philosophy

Form: Limerick


Comments about What To Do! Limerick by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/12/2016 4:02:00 AM)


    Without poison! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Dimitrios Galanis (1/12/2016 9:48:00 AM)


    Tertium datum poesy? (Report) Reply

  • Pithy Marvel (1/12/2016 1:03:00 AM)


    sounds a bit like marriage (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (1/11/2016 4:20:00 PM)


    Unable to do both or neither. Not choosing, a choice? (Report) Reply

  • Ari Alsio (1/11/2016 12:37:00 PM)


    A wise poem found the ears
    your brain will open up the tears
    thoughts ran like bears run
    take his hand a gun
    poem has the real turn,
    where the poem burns.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2016



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