When Dusk Kissed Her Feathers πŸ‘„ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

When Dusk Kissed Her Feathers πŸ‘„

Rating: 4.9


When dusk kissed her feathers
At the beach of dark sand
With many pebbles scattered around
At the quite down end
Near Aphrodite's, birth place
The love was in the air
The fragrance very fresh
As the spring emerged
From the rocky heart's mountain
The wings of dream took a flight
Over the valley of love
Where the sweetness of the nature
And the coral bay resonated
The symphony of lifeless heart
Buried beneath, somewhere in the hard rock
Singing the unheard songs of love
As the sun went below the horizon
And the crescent moon emerged
My Mediterranean sea calmed down
And between the two my heart found solace. ❀️

Saturday, September 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoyza Da Vinka 28 September 2020

Great Imagery in your poem The love was in the air The fragrance very fresh As the spring emerged From the rocky heart's mountain The wings of dream took a flight Over the valley of love

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2020

A brilliant poem. Appreciated....Top ??

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Sandra Feldman 26 September 2020

Beautifully described emotions and feelings. A pleasure to read.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 26 September 2020

The resonance of love and dreams is poetised here with apt images

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Varsha M 26 September 2020

Very beautifully penned imagery poetry. It is really touchy. As the spring emerged From the rocky heart's mountain The wings of dream took a flight Over the valley of love Where the sweetness of the nature And the coral bay resonated The symphony of lifeless heart Buried beneath, somewhere in the hard rock Singing the unheard songs of love....these lines really beautiful.

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Gordon Walter 22 October 2020

Simply superb lines and I quote: The symphony of lifeless heart Buried beneath, somewhere in the hard rock Singing the unheard songs of love As the sun went below the horizon

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 September 2020

My Mediterranean sea calmed down And between the two my heart found solace....wo it's a lovely poem; love special; enjoyable; beautiful to read

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Mihaela Pirjol 29 September 2020

Thank you for the invitation to read this poem, Asim! I must admit: Your love-poems are the best on this site; and, when I read them, I react spontaneously: I am moved by them, I live and feel profoundly any emotion, sentiment, and thought I once thought...Your poems make me feel my heart... You are truly a poet of great sensibility and wisdom; which, is a rare combination! A great equilibrium between heart and mind!

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Gruber Rofy 28 September 2020

Two contrasts beautifully handled Where the sweetness of the nature And the coral bay resonated

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Mamta S 28 September 2020

beyond imagination at Maxus in a world of green

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