When Frozen Streams Shall Flow Once More Comments

Rest assured, the sun shall shine Warming the days, both your's and mine Closing Winter's door once more As it's done so many times before Then it is that we shall bask Shed new light, and shed the mask Heavy is the heart grown cold Thawed it shines of Luna's gold so easily inspired by your work.. the imagery was most grand.. Wendy :)

As Shelley posed the question 'If winter comes can spring be far behind? ' I too say console yourself looking at the bright Star in the night about the coming bright Sun shine soon and the spring with all its colourful objects everywhere to inspire and rejoice all in victory in their missions in the world!

great poem Andrew! i can always visulise what you write. That watery sun so far away cannot penetrate this winters day that pale yellow sphere can shed no heat through the snow and wind and sleet regards Bob

And let it be that streams flow gracefully for thee, , Andrew, you are a wonderful writer Love duncan X

Lovely piece Andrew, the flow was great, and what a lovely sentence 'When Frozen Streams Shall Flow Once More' making a super ending to this wonderful read. Excellence from your pen. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX