Rohit Sharma

Rookie - 8 Points (July 6,1984 / Amritsar, India)

When I Look At You - Poem by Rohit Sharma

When I look at u..

I see the whole world
In your beautiful eyes...
The life seems so aesthetic
Everything feels so nice! ! !

When I look at u..

I feel u r someone
Who'll always b there...
No matter how the time unfolds
U will always take care! ! !

When I look at u..

I feel u love me
From the depth of ur heart...
We r together 4ever
We will never be apart! ! !

When I look at u..

I feel stronger to see
You standing by my side...
You r the ultimate for me
Feelings tell me; i m right! ! !

When I look at u...

I wanna tell you
Sweetheart, how much I love you
You are the reason for my happiness
and I'll always be with you! ! !


Comments about When I Look At You by Rohit Sharma

  • (7/13/2010 8:08:00 PM)


    This poem would have been have been much more effective had you written it in full English, nevertheless another amazing composition. Love is something to ponder. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/13/2010 4:11:00 AM)


    Wow i can say she will be very lucky girl who you will give your heart......... Again a beautifull poem........10 (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (7/3/2010 4:22:00 AM)


    Love this lovely love poem...mmm, she is so lucky having a soul mate like u! (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2010 11:50:00 PM)


    Captivating.......Romantic. Oh rohit I'm speechless! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Just wanna wish u & ur loved one all the nature's treasure........
    the storehouse of her joys,
    the highest heaven of pleasure,
    the bliss which is pure
    & God's blessings 4ever....
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  • Aastha Uppal (7/2/2010 3:04:00 PM)


    beautifully explains the purity and sanctity of love.. seems really simple but thats the most difficult.. how the mere presence of your loved one can make you feel that you are blessed.. nice one there! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2010 2:57:00 PM)


    You are one of the best love poets...'when i see you.... i see a romantic poet'. (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2010 12:12:00 PM)


    A very sweet love poem. (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2010 7:33:00 AM)


    A very beautiful declaration of love from an eloquent heart! (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2010 2:47:00 AM)


    You are a great love poet. With subtle variations, you win the reader's heart(and of course, heat of your sweetheart!) . Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2010 6:28:00 AM)


    Excellent Rohit! I have become old. But anyhow, I will Try some few Lines like you......

    When I look at u..

    Time Comes to Standstill
    Who said 'Time and Tide wait for None? '
    Is Innocence other name for your face?
    Is Beauty a Synonym for You?

    Ha! Ha! Ha! It took Quarter Hour to write Four such Lines.
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2010 9:23:00 PM)


    Some1 will lose words, just standing and staring if u said this 2 them and yes wassila he can say i love you 2 some1 i believe that: ] (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2010 10:43:00 AM)


    Mesmerising love! Beautifully penned.: D (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2010 6:31:00 AM)


    I wanna tell you
    Sweetheart, how much I love you
    You are the reason for my happiness
    and I'll always be with you! ! !

    can you tell someone how much you love her/him? ?

    this is great it touched me :)
    keep writing
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 22, 2010



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