When I'm Gone Poem by Lyn Paul

Who will wake you and who will think good and take care? Very nicely asked in poetic mood. Wonderful presentation really.

When body and soul of two get tuned then one can feel and write such a fabulous poem on love! Beautiful.........

Very poignant one.....Lyn......scripted with simple and loving words that touches everybody's heart........when I am gone.....who will sit by and be faithful and smile and be cool.......beautiful composition......10

With all oddities, love life! Also our love for our dear ones should continue even beyond death! This I feel is the salient message of this poem! A moving write, Lyn!

Heartfelt poem Lyn. I can see the painful tears flowing through this poem. Beautiful message, we should appreciate every moment while living itself. But many of them realise its worth after one of them is gone. Beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it. Thank you Lyn for your positive words, really its an inspiration for me.

That life, Is just not worth dying for We must smell the roses Feel the wind And appreciate every moment Just so must more Truly said.

Brought tears to my eyes Lyn. I can really relate to this lovely poem.

Your thoughts on 'When I'm Gone' are very touchy. We often are not aware how messy our lives would be when either of the spouses won't be there! 'Who will wake you Who will answer to you all Who will clean your clothes' - are some of the small mundane works that are oft forgotten, but realized when the one to do these is no more there. 'When I'm Gone Will... You please realise That life, Is just not worth dying for We must smell the roses Feel the wind And appreciate every moment' - Yes, I fully agree! In 'Just so must more', will it be 'much' in place of 'must'? Over all, a nice poem indeed!

Love it! Just the way I feel. A10