Autumn leaves on the ground
My mind is in leaf
Everywhere white snow
My heart melts the grief
For weeks gray sky
My soul flies in blue
All of them do happen
When I think of you
(2008/10/21)
Amir, how sad and lovely write my heart melts the grieft....and my mind lefted up for you...nice one.
PERSIAN, MAY LOVE BE ALL YOU WANT AND EXPECT IT TO BE. SUCH A TENDER, CARING, WARM CONNECTION TO THE HEART AND NATURE, THIS POEM. MAY LOVE BE YOUR REWARD FOR ALL TIME! THANK YOU, CAROL
Very air and heavenly poems. Do not miss a nightingale sometimes autumn blossom more beautifully... 10... Tsira
wow wow wow, as beautiful as sad. very touchy. i like short poems, coz its much more difficult to be able to put all the thoughts in less lines. bravo, my poet!
wow......u left me breathless! ! ! tht is an amazing poem
So simple and sweet! I really like this. 'My soul flies in blue' That is a wonderful line! Great work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that is preety i liked it. you asked to read it so i did and i liked it