Autumn leaves on the ground
My mind is in leaf
Everywhere white snow
My heart melts the grief
For weeks gray sky
My soul flies in blue
All of them do happen
When I think of you
(2008/10/21)
A lovely poem in which the metaphor of automn brings a new sight of the self :) 10!
Everywhere white snow My heart burns the grief I just Love how your Images can be related to other things Sooo Easily good one
It is a lovely insight of words and is pieced together beautifully
wow wow wow, as beautiful as sad. very touchy. i like short poems, coz its much more difficult to be able to put all the thoughts in less lines. bravo, my poet!
wow......u left me breathless! ! ! tht is an amazing poem
So simple and sweet! I really like this. 'My soul flies in blue' That is a wonderful line! Great work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brief, but beautiful. A fine lyric piece. l0 from me. Warm regards, Sandra