When I Think Of You Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

When I Think Of You

Rating: 4.8


Autumn leaves on the ground
My mind is in leaf

Everywhere white snow
My heart melts the grief

For weeks gray sky
My soul flies in blue

All of them do happen
When I think of you

(2008/10/21)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bobbie Mcnay 24 October 2008

that is preety i liked it. you asked to read it so i did and i liked it

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Leon & Sarah Harris 23 October 2008

Amir, how sad and lovely write my heart melts the grieft....and my mind lefted up for you...nice one.

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Carol Rhodes 23 October 2008

PERSIAN, MAY LOVE BE ALL YOU WANT AND EXPECT IT TO BE. SUCH A TENDER, CARING, WARM CONNECTION TO THE HEART AND NATURE, THIS POEM. MAY LOVE BE YOUR REWARD FOR ALL TIME! THANK YOU, CAROL

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Tsira Goge 23 October 2008

Very air and heavenly poems. Do not miss a nightingale sometimes autumn blossom more beautifully... 10... Tsira

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Janice Etienne 22 October 2008

this makes me happy it's really pleasent

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Emma Adamyan 26 June 2009

wow wow wow, as beautiful as sad. very touchy. i like short poems, coz its much more difficult to be able to put all the thoughts in less lines. bravo, my poet!

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 06 February 2009

wow......u left me breathless! ! ! tht is an amazing poem

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Shabre Moore 21 January 2009

that's jus totally beautiful i realy do like it

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Caroline Weeks 29 October 2008

So simple and sweet! I really like this. 'My soul flies in blue' That is a wonderful line! Great work.

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Pure Remedy 24 October 2008

AWW THAT IS TO SWEET! .. I LIKE

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