Per. Nig.

When I Think Of You

Autumn leaves on the ground
My mind is in leaf

Everywhere white snow
My heart melts the grief

For weeks gray sky
My soul flies in blue

All of them do happen
When I think of you

(2008/10/21)

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 21, 2008
Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2008

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  • Emma AdamyanEmma Adamyan (6/26/2009 3:03:00 AM)

    wow wow wow, as beautiful as sad. very touchy. i like short poems, coz its much more difficult to be able to put all the thoughts in less lines. bravo, my poet!

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  • Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) (2/6/2009 10:38:00 PM)

    wow......u left me breathless! ! ! tht is an amazing poem

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  • Shabre Moore (1/21/2009 12:57:00 PM)

    that's jus totally beautiful i realy do like it

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  • Caroline Weeks (10/29/2008 8:46:00 AM)

    So simple and sweet! I really like this.
    'My soul flies in blue'
    That is a wonderful line! Great work.

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  • Pure Remedy (10/24/2008 7:00:00 PM)

    AWW THAT IS TO SWEET! .. I LIKE

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  • Bobbie Mcnay (10/24/2008 11:44:00 AM)

    that is preety i liked it. you asked to read it so i did and i liked it

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  • Leon & Sarah Harris (10/23/2008 3:27:00 PM)

    Amir, how sad and lovely write my heart melts the grieft....and my mind lefted up for you...nice one.

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  • Carol Rhodes (10/23/2008 1:48:00 PM)

    PERSIAN, MAY LOVE BE ALL YOU WANT AND EXPECT IT TO BE. SUCH A TENDER, CARING, WARM CONNECTION TO THE HEART AND NATURE, THIS POEM. MAY LOVE BE YOUR REWARD FOR ALL TIME! THANK YOU, CAROL

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  • Tsira Goge (10/23/2008 6:12:00 AM)

    Very air and heavenly poems. Do not miss a nightingale sometimes autumn blossom more beautifully... 10...
    Tsira

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  • Janice Etienne (10/22/2008 4:41:00 PM)

    this makes me happy
    it's really pleasent

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  • Rosan Sadir (10/22/2008 12:51:00 PM)

    It is a lovely insight of words and is pieced together beautifully

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  • Lindsey Ashton (10/22/2008 12:25:00 PM)

    nice poem, nicley written

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  • Sarah AbdullahSarah Abdullah (10/22/2008 10:27:00 AM)

    Everywhere white snow
    My heart burns the grief

    I just Love how your Images can be related to other things Sooo Easily
    good one

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  • M M (10/22/2008 2:36:00 AM)

    A lovely poem in which the metaphor of automn brings a new sight of the self :)
    10!

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  • Sandra Fowler (10/22/2008 2:02:00 AM)

    Brief, but beautiful. A fine lyric piece. l0 from me.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

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  • Thad Wilk (10/22/2008 12:16:00 AM)

    A touching poem - of love! Great read Shiraz! !
    Best wishes! *10*! !
    Friend Thad

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  • Lynda Robson (10/21/2008 4:06:00 PM)

    Well written poem expressing thoughts of autumn colours, thanks,
    10
    Lynda xx

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