When I Was Dying. Poem by Prakash Mehra

it has a very dark and powerful emotion that can be felt by the readers... it's a nice read! ! ! ^_^

i love the change in emotion from the last two poems i've read. I love to read different emotions in several poems it makes you seem interesting so you've done a very good job so far. =]

i like it it was a good write, nice

I give you the strength to rebuke the one that gave you the strength to free yourself from me P.M., and as A.R.T or any reflective teaching I would say this is an angry child, but account for the autism, and then again I was made to be a walking pin cushion, I just always hated needles

I read the poem whole and i found that it's very true spically in the last stanza good work keep writing..10

What a touching lines? ? ? Weren’t you aware of severity; didn’t you catch the growing bane? Yet you let me die, and broke the cord. Why did you leave me in silence, when I was in hyper pain! Mehra. Your poem touched my sentiment. So simple...so soothing. Keep it up.

i love it! great job! !

Yes, I like this Prakesh. Thank you. (I try to steer clear of poems about God, alot of people on this site get very upset, and send rude emails! ! ! ! And they are usually very poor poets anyway! ! !)

A dying man shares his last views well in the poem.

Excellent poem! ! I really liked it so much..10.if you want you can read my latest poem.thanks for sharing...