Time just flows past
And you never notice
Till subtle changes come bubbling to the surface;
When intimacy turns into indifference.
Time just flows past
And you never notice
Till your close friends just drift away;
When intimacy turns into indifference.
Time just flows past
And you never notice
Till people who supported you in tough times just disappear;
When intimacy turns into indifference.
Time just flows past
And you never notice
Till one’s cross feels too heavy;
When intimacy turns into indifference.
There are many other beautiful and positive things in life, that one should appreciate and enjoy. Cheer up my fellow poet, life comes with its pros and its cons. All we can do, is accept whatever comes our way and carry on. Nevertheless, this is a beautiful poem, technically written. ~Besa
Excellent thinking. Very true of life and it is well versed in to a poem. I really like it. Great. Keep it up!
Extra-ordinary depth. Quite imaginative. Slightly emotional. Loved it.
Till subtle changes come bubbling to the surface; When intimacy turns into indifference. Till your close friends just drift away; When intimacy turns into indifference. Realities of life and the life of expectations and sadness.. tony
A highly relatable experience that resonates with me in Toto. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
I relate your 11th line to my personal experiences! A magnificent piece of work.... liked it....10
Cold waves for every heated earth is a must. All colours fade one day. But the fading colour of intimacy hurts. A beautiful way of presenting the slow changing over warmth of relationship. Well done Ma'am. Thanks for the sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
expressing means dealing with it.................... the next step is beyond these words keep on writing keep on living best wishes