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When My Heart Opens Up And My Soul Dances.

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My heart opens up and my soul dances,
This doesn't happen so often,
It happens only when my body seeks rejoice,
When the first drop of rain falls on my body,
When the first sunray touches my skin,
When the breeze enters with fragrance,
When thoughts cross my mind,
When eye meets an eye and sees the twinkle,
And when the moon appears in full.
Tuesday, March 16, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical,cute love
मेरा दिल खुल जाये और मेरी आत्मा नाच उठे ऐसा अक्सर नहीं होता यह तभी होता है जब मेरा शरीर आनन्द का अनुभव करता है जब बारिश की पहली बूंद मेरे शरीर पर पड़ती है जब पहली धूप मेरी त्वचा को छूती है जब सुगंध के साथ हवा भीतर प्रवेश करती है जब विचार मेरे मस्तिष्क से पार हो जाते हैं जब आंख मिलती उनकी चमकती आँखों से और जब चंद्रमा पूर्ण दिखाई देता है
Michael Jack 23 March 2021
Excellent expression. When eye meets an eye and sees the twinkle...*****
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Gordon Walter 20 March 2021
Marvellous poem.
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Darren Jkoeryo 17 March 2021
Great expression...
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 March 2021
Full 5 Stars and to my Favourites. Thank you so much for sharing this fascinating poem
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 March 2021
I won't say you are a lune-atic or lunatic, but I call this moonatic, only when it is full moon, and When My Heart Opens Up And My Soul Dances, but the full moon that does that.That is not often, only once in the 28 days, Asim Sir!
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Shreya Hacks 17 March 2021
Wonderful expression, Asim.
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Deepak S S 17 March 2021
Wow I enjoyed read both versions. ???? ??? ??? ???? ?? ???? ????? ??? ???...Awesome
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Anjandev Roy 17 March 2021
Profound piece......thank u, dear friend...
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 March 2021
A beautiful poem... poetic expression flows like a delightful running stream carrying philosophocal ripples.. appreciated
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Deluke Muwanigwa 16 March 2021
Lovely. And i am sure you missed...When i write a lovely poem
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