When The Morning Dew Drips - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

I'll give it 4 stars. I like it. I had to check on structure of modern tankas and you have the 5-7-5-7-7. Very nice. bri ;)

Rose Marie, I'd use 'hide', not 'hid'. And I think line 2 should end with a period; I don't see one, & I can barely see one at end of your last line. bri:

The imagery and the magical awe of nature is so beautifully captured here! .. This also reminds me of very special times with my Mom! ..

Oh, So deeply beautiful! .. Such wonderous fantastic imagery! .. And feeling spun into this! .. Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++

Brilliant work......thank u, dear poetess.

Nice imagery. Dew sunshine and spider web together make a morning garden great

"The wildest wild garden shines" and ever so brightly!

Revisiting I find it so marvellous!

Keen observation. We can see cob webs in various shapes like spread nets, hollow tunnel etc. wth dew drops waiting to be vaporised in the early sun

Did I already suggest 'hide' for 'hid' and a period at end of line 2? bri : )