When The Planets Are Aligned Poem by Uriah Hamilton

When The Planets Are Aligned

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If I become depressed
And fail to see you
In your floral dress,
Then my weekend will be
Funeral-parlor sad,
Living a life of Ash Wednesdays alone.

I’ll call you on the telephone,
And tell you that your feminine voice
Is the entire panacea that I need
When my world is vacant parking lots
Infiltrated by degradation and thorny weeds.

If you allow me to hold your hand,
I know that you will understand
My overwhelming desire
To make you the object of intense devotion.

Please, don’t walk away and trample these emotions;
We may not meet again for several lonely lifetimes
Until the planets are aligned mystically perfect.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 02 March 2007

Wow...I'm impressed by this poem....it's darn good! ! Hugs, Dee

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Sandra Fowler 26 February 2007

Uniquely Uriah Hamilton. Beautiful, sad, and always worth reading. Kindest regrds, Sandra

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Will Barber 26 February 2007

Your journeys at the edge of darkness are always fascinating. - Will

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Wow...You've done it again...ANOTHER MASTERPIECE! ! ! Keep writing so I can read more! Love Ya!

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Ernestine Northover 24 February 2007

A delightful piece of poetry Uriah. So ethereal, soft and sweet. A joy to read and a pleasure to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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