When The Planets Are Aligned Poem by Uriah Hamilton

When The Planets Are Aligned

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If I become depressed
And fail to see you
In your floral dress,
Then my weekend will be
Funeral-parlor sad,
Living a life of Ash Wednesdays alone.

I’ll call you on the telephone,
And tell you that your feminine voice
Is the entire panacea that I need
When my world is vacant parking lots
Infiltrated by degradation and thorny weeds.

If you allow me to hold your hand,
I know that you will understand
My overwhelming desire
To make you the object of intense devotion.

Please, don’t walk away and trample these emotions;
We may not meet again for several lonely lifetimes
Until the planets are aligned mystically perfect.

Saturday, February 24, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: funeral
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 02 March 2007

Wow...I'm impressed by this poem....it's darn good! ! Hugs, Dee

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Sandra Fowler 26 February 2007

Uniquely Uriah Hamilton. Beautiful, sad, and always worth reading. Kindest regrds, Sandra

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Will Barber 26 February 2007

Your journeys at the edge of darkness are always fascinating. - Will

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Wow...You've done it again...ANOTHER MASTERPIECE! ! ! Keep writing so I can read more! Love Ya!

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Ernestine Northover 24 February 2007

A delightful piece of poetry Uriah. So ethereal, soft and sweet. A joy to read and a pleasure to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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