M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

When You Are Far…. - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

When you are far away from me
And you feel like seeing me
I will appear in sky by being mooned
To spend the night with you.

When you get surrounded by the troubles
Just let me know once
I will stitch all wounds
As if they never existed

When the heart becomes restless to meet
And you feel to have me beside you
Just close your eyes for a few seconds
You will find me in within

You will fly without the wings
I can provide this strength to you
Just take my imaginations
When waves are nearing the shore

Time has the healing power
It can cure all wounds
But when you find difficult to pass it
You come to my thoughts then

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love and friendship, separation

Form: Quatern


Comments about When You Are Far…. by M. Asim Nehal

  • (2/2/2016 9:12:00 AM)


    Both versions are fantastic. (Report) Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (2/1/2016 3:59:00 AM)


    What a lovely poem, expressing love in a simple, yet powerful way. The reader savors its soft n tender feel long after reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol (1/30/2016 2:27:00 AM)


    Wisely stated: '' Time has the healing power
    It can cure all wounds ''

    A beautiful love poem!
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  • Rajnish Manga (1/29/2016 3:13:00 AM)


    Anybody would like to have such a versatile friend and a companion in life. Thanks, Asim ji.
    Just close your eyes for a few seconds
    You will find me in within
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 29, 2016

Poem Edited: Friday, January 29, 2016


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