When You Are Gone From Me Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

When You Are Gone From Me

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When you are gone from me
My mind wanders out to sea
On the beach where we met

When you are gone from me
I ride my loneliness at sea
Wondering what i'd do if you never came back

When you are gone from me
I can never be free
Remembering your suicide attempt.

Memories of that horrible day
Replay like yesterday
When you are gone from me

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 14 March 2021

Memories keep coming back, especially the saddest one. A rhyming poem kept the poetry. Greatly done, dear poet.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 13 March 2021

Thank you all.

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Kostas Lagos 13 March 2021

Memories keep torturing us sometimes. Good poem!

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Captain Cur 12 March 2021

So sorry to hear that someone you love and care deeply about is suffering so badly. The sea exemplifies great beauty but also deep loneliness.

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Varsha M 12 March 2021

A sadistic poem. When your are gone from me.... I'll live like king.... that's what i wished... okay. Enjoying my freedom that was curbed.... I'll live like a king king

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