A Perfect Person Poem by Deluke Muwanigwa

A Perfect Person

Rating: 4.5


A perfect person

A perfect person
Is not perfect per se
It's a person suffering disaffection
Seeking solace in pseudo affection

Isn't a perfect person boring?
Making an issue of snoring?
Always point scoring?
And scorn pouring?

We need less of, not more
So we can get in the door.
Of the perfect person
Putting our normal face on

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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Robert Murray Smith. Thanks Bob.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 30 December 2020

Saddest of all is that a Perfect Person is a neurotic person. Sure not a healthy amiable person. Good poem, Deluke! I THOUGHT this was your based upon your own poem.

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David Wood 30 December 2020

It's the flaws in people that make them beautiful and unique.5*

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Susan Williams 30 December 2020

I liked the seriousness followed by the humor--gave the poem a deeper texture that way as well as a graciousness toward our flaws---well done!

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Varsha M 29 December 2020

There is no perfect person. And life of perfection can never be achieved. But making it work for better understanding is better s d sound.

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Nabakishore Dash 01 December 2021

All lines are true.Well imagined and amazingly crafted.But no body in world is 100% pure and perfect.5 stars full.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 November 2021

Excellent...i sincerely appreciate this thoughtful write....5 stars

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Gordon Walter 20 March 2021

No one is free from faults.

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Anjandev Roy 08 January 2021

Well written....

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M Asim Nehal 31 December 2020

There is nothing called perfection, it's all state of mind. So accept the way they are and what they do. Nice thoughtful poem. You did not add me in your friend's list even with this brand new format.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 31 December 2020

I will. Still trying to understand the new vibe. Thanks.

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