When You Come Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

When You Come

Rating: 5.0


I am writing a poem.
Tell me when you will come?

When you dashed on my shore
the birds flew away from the trees.
Then I wrote a poem on you.

I am writing a poem.
Tell me when you will come again?
I shall go out aimlessly
my mind longing the freedom.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2019

Tell me when you will come? I find a great depth in this powerful inquisition! A lovely poem.....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2019

Freedom! ! ! ! Longing! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 February 2019

When you dashed on my shore the birds flew away from the trees. Then I wrote a poem on you..your presence, your dashing, my love, and my joy makes me write...... how true. this is really a poetic experience. poetry is born out of l ove.. thank u. tony

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Ravinder Soni 05 February 2019

A good one, Akham; enjoyed reading it.

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