When You Left Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

When You Left

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When you left, I felt
Harmony concordance solace
In the proximity of Allah
I felt a liberating aura
From these worldly
Wicked relationships
When you left
I hit back strongly
Conquering the demons
Endeavoring to overwhelm
My negative contemplation
I turned back from this world
Taking my journey into mystical realm
My ultimate final destination
To seek forgiveness for my sins
From consistently sympathetic
Consistently loving beloved.

© Aarzoo Mehek

When You Left
Friday, August 25, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness,mystical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 17 September 2023

Humans can never give happiness. Sometimes goodbyes are great lessons. I appreciate your resilience. Divine!

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Anjandev Roy 25 August 2023

This is an excellent work......thank u....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 August 2023

Brilliant piece Aarzoo TFS

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 August 2023

I turned back from this world taking my journey into mystical realm, , , beautiful expression! A poem of hope and positivity!

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