When You Say I Am Your Dream-Boy Comments

It's great now Asif! Well done!

A lovely heartfelt poem, great write!

Imagery of a passionate lover adroitly displayed. Nice write. Keep it up.

Short sweet simple.. Keep it up.. :)

I wish as you said., a sweet poem indeed.

really a sweet expression of a lover entwined with a passion full of luster expressed in a dream of your heart that you may have felt at the very start.

very sweet and short poem.................composed beautifully

very dreamy, short and sweet poem :)

That sound a joyful write, awesome poem like always_Soul

that is a very sweet poem. nice work :)

very touching lines..... vow.