I stood on the rooftop
With the gleaming silver moonlight
Swimming over my skin.
Soothing cool winds blew
With an aroma of fresh roses
From nowhere,
With the murmurs of trees
All around,
Brightening my subtle senses.
Thousands of stars twinkling above,
Spoke to my soul
Expressing their delicate wish
To come down and dance,
With a scintillating euphoria,
As words of intense love
And thoughts of sheer ecstasy
Enveloped the blissful spirit!
I gazed all around
With an elated face,
With no sign of grimace
Blowing a flying kiss in the darkness
Closing my eyes, feeling heavenly..
With passion and romance
Reigning in the air!
But, where are you?
Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri
very strong expression of subtle feelings. The entire universe is a party to your platonic affair, you very intelligently have enjoyed your one night date with nature so have I.
A very good poem, everything seems so real the loneliness the smell of the roses, well done.
A sense of loss at the night, the romantic aroma, made it a stupendous poem.
Wow a superb romantic freeverse in splendid metaphor! Enjoyd readin
Remarkable indeed is your apt selection of words and your complete control over thoughts developed here. I feel happy to see over here a good poet with a mission straight! What a search for...... and your imagination leaves me astounded Mr Indrani Bhaduri. A good write!
You capture the intense feelings of being in love so effortlessly, a beautiful inspired write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely romantic poem...gud job friend...keep writing.. »so close«