Where Life Flows In Serenity ~ Let's Go There. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Where Life Flows In Serenity ~ Let's Go There.

Rating: 5.0


We are floating on the stream of Time,
In this earthly world which is full of hustle-bustle,
To meet the necessity and ends,
Life is beyond this, for sure.

Let us float on with ease there,
Where Time has no meaning,
Far beyond this world,
Outside the limits of this earth,
Where there is neither sun nor moon,
Neither earth nor the sky above.

Where time stands still and stays back,
Nothing to count, nothing to frighten,
Where trees grow at will and bear fruits
Where wind is soft and gentle
Where rivers carry milk and honey
Where there is neither death nor fear
No hustle-bustle, no rush hours
Where life flows in serenity
Let's go to that place and dwell,
In peace, forever and ever……….

Sunday, July 18, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: afterlife,dreams,mystical philosophy,journey
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 July 2021

This is pure poetic perfection

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Lasaad Tayeb 18 July 2021

Incredibly penned poem, full of imagery and thought-provoking ideas, rated 5*

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Anjandev Roy 18 July 2021

In peace, forever and ever.....wonderful..

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 July 2021

This imagery rich verse is very peaceful and beautifully written.5 stars

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me poet yeps poet 18 July 2021

YES I READ THIS MAN

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Juhaina Tumlu 21 July 2021

Timeless beauty,

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Aarzoo Mehek 20 July 2021

Everybody's dream of such place. May we all reside there in the realm of god Eid Mubarak Asim. Salamat raho.

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Thank you for these serene thoughts......top stars

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That's right Asim ji. Let us move to the place where love flows.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2021

Absolutely a brilliant poem......top score!

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