In dreams I see
those stars
laid bare for me
deserts large
and ocean drops
universes in my eyes
even though succinct,
when thou playest god to me
Remake me again
See thou my puerile heart of gold
Sculpt me as thy will
With hands
like Michaelangelo's
Paint me
with myriad hues
of the rainbow
The ecstasy I want
honey or nectar
your oblation,
like rivulets of Eden
flow from thy heart
the musky fragrance of love
so divine so pure
lingers on and on
never to evanesce.
Dost thou remember
those looks,
a longing of a mute child.
Those gifts
when hastily snatched,
as diamonds
from the caverns of the mines,
so were the tears from my eyes
that fell to become the stars
in that distant sky,
when playing hide ad seek
in the game of solitary love
Hush I hear
thy many whispers in my ears
And blush
i feel, the feel of those fingers
the silken strands of my hairs.
hide my face on thy bust will I
That moments desire so seraphic
I canst never forget that my love
24-01-2009
you write so beautifuly anju that one feels lost in magical words of your poems, you are truly a gifted and great poet and i love reading your works...the whole poem's great but these lines are superb.... 'Dost thou remember those looks, a longing of a mute child. Those gifts when hastily snatched, as diamonds from the caverns of the mines, so were the tears from my eyes that fell to become the stars in that distant sky, when playing hide ad seek in the game of solitary love'....bravo, bravo...many 100's for this beautiful piece..thanks rgds asif
Ectasy reigns here in this most pleasing poetic verse, the imagry is fantastic and it presents a beautifull picture of love shared within.
This poem reflects ecstatic moments, is warm and encircling.
love.love.love..where is the love? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ! ? ! ? ! ...unhhhhhhhhhhh ohh here is the love, in the poem/....look it described so well and so clearly that you can se the love in the eyes just like the wind...heheheh.but di really it can be feel and really lovable......lots of best wisshes for your poems to touch the sucess......some words are hard to understand but can be searched in the dictionary.heheh
Bursting with beauty that wispers in the wind with thunderous tones of love... Wow! 10/10
Remake me again/See thou my purerile heart of Gold! Wonderful! Very touching poem..Only lover can utter this lines..Very sensitive...
REALLY A GOOD POEM HAVING THE MIDAS TOUCH OF IMAGINATION AND IMAGERY
I rea dit in awe. half way through my eyes closed and my heart continued the read. I love it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very charming poem with beautiful imagery and feelings 10/10