White Leaves Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
White Leaves
Many of us have seen from far,
White leaves fall from tree star.
Who watches with full of care?
Few plan not to be in the stare.
Ripen fruits, dried leaves they see,
Wet flower cries too comes bee,
Decorating in minds of many fly,
Flower leaving fragrance does dry.
Modern time people plan do think,
Behind matter run, in pleasure sink.
Link their minds to money more,
They forget how to cross life's shore.
Service to parents forget children,
In happiness they do sorrow rain.
Pain many feel pleasure to dry up,
Some plan to drink shiny star cup.
Wonder, wonder is affection to dust,
All should realize glory of God must.
Awakening is only God's hand power
White leaves can be green in top tower.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 December 2014. All rights reserved.
Wonder, wonder is affection to dust, All should realize glory of God must. Awakening is only God's hand power White leaves can be green in top tower. Once again, a beautiful poem that speaks of the glory of God and the realisation of His greatness. Well crafted with attractive metaphors. A full vote, Sir!
Service to parents forget children, In happiness they do sorrow rain....is this the right way of writing?
There is no indication after long if PH has taken my feedback...and I leave it at that.
Wonder, wonder is affection to dust, All should realize glory of God must. Awakening is only God's hand power White leaves can be green in top tower. A lovely concluding quatrain ending a great poem centred ariund glory of God, as usual.
White leaves are nice. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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