Why Poem by mimzy sue

Why

Rating: 3.4


i asked myself why?
i have no answer
i asked people why?
they did'nt have the answer either
so i asked God to give me an asnwer..
i'm waitin....
i'm still waitin....
when will i get the answer
God's knows...
but i'm waitin anyway
why it have to be like this-
there's somethin i need
don't know what
i tried to find it
don't know where to go
i feel tired and numb
i asked myself again
'what's this'
Lil voice in my heart tells me
'THIS IS LIFE'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 25 October 2008

Why do we all ask questions, eh? From the time we can speak, we ask 'why? ' I guess it's part of being a human being and part of the mystery of the journey we call life. Your words certainly got me thinking. A thoughtful poem in a melancholy key and a final line that answers her own question. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Jerry Hughes 24 October 2008

Excellent, just watch your spelling little one...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 October 2008

O.k., Mimzy....I got your message....and you got my attention....And my assessment on your work is this: Quite commendable for a young writer, and indicationa of a vast spectrum of potential. nioce Work, young lady...Keep that pen pumpin'! ~ F j R ~ ((((((()))))))

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Ivor Hogg 09 October 2008

Perhaps that is why we live to seek the answer

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008

Lucid and truly nice poem. 10+

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Mimzy. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2008

Life is very complex than we do see it around us; but, we don't have to give in our dreams.So, one day, you will surely know 'WHY'. That is a very nice poem.Thanks. Edward Kofi Louis

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Reetessh Sabrr 06 November 2008

sometimes the echo is not heard coz it is converged into one strong emotional being like you very nice write

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Srujini M 04 November 2008

you have asked the question 'why' which everyone asks.. some openly and some in silence.. nice poem, ,

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Jhon Fernandis 02 November 2008

wow what a poem i like it most i had never read this poem before jhon fernandis real name aman mahajan [email protected]

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