Is it the way you look at me with that look of ´´you are the one´´ you have?
Is it the way your hands take mine with such delicacy?
Or is it the way your lips touch mine with the agony of an inner love,
That makes me freeze when you walk around…
Maybe it is the way our hearts seem to be bonded by a unique love,
An unspoken love, where nothing is said,
A love that softly and delicately flows like the wind through your cheeks,
You can feel it, freeze by its touch,
But you will never be able to delight your eyes with such a beautiful thing.
Everything from you makes me love you,
Your velvet music-like voice,
The sweet look of your pretty dark brown shiny eyes,
The soft and delicate texture of your perfect skin,
The precious shape of your lips, sculpted with an artist’s hand on your face.
I don’t know why I love you with this beautiful love,
And no mistakes, no distance nothing in the entire universe,
Will make me love you less than this,
As every second that goes by my love for you grows a little bit more,
And no force in the world will finish this unique and perfect love…
I Love You…
February 7,2009
(dedicated to my love… I know you are still there…)
Wow. Thats a brilliant poem. More upbeat then my stuff. Keep up the good work!
young lady this is a breathtaking piece.
Beautiful dedication..hope it is received as well as we have. Nicely writtten, style and maturity. Word
Ana, this is trully a beautifull write filled with so much love and expression of it.. It captures the heart of each and every reader I can asure you... Your wittings are absoluty getting soo much charactor.... Very very touching..... Bonnie
This is a charming and beautiful poem. If only the whole world could feel and love so deeply...
a beautiful composition, gathered with pure and soft love. thanks for sharing.
Check the third line from the bottom! I think this is simply a beautiful loving series of expressions about young love. A fresh love. A love of purity. The'first and best kind of love. The presentation was as soft in word and feel as the love itself. I hope it lasts. GW62
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
10/10 loved it especially the 'The precious shape of your lips, sculpted with an artist’s hand on your face' keep up the great work