lady grace

Wild Flower

A simple girl she was
a simple woman she’ll be
lives in her simplest dream
future... God makes her free...

like a flower produces nectar
not to attract but to feed
bees.. butterflies and other insects
pollinate to produce nicer breeds..

in a forest where a monster lives
dark cold nights he suffers most
like a butterfly he wanted to see
a honey that moist's lips of a soldier bee…

by curiosity he went on
to the garden of no return
a pitcher plant he meets
she bites, she kills...she sleeps….


© 2009 lady grace (All rights reserved

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 22, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, September 4, 2009

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  • Eyan Desir (4/26/2010 9:14:00 AM)

    haha u and your poems.......

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  • Melissa Smith (8/1/2009 7:41:00 PM)

    Nice choice of words and intense flow. LOVED it! ! 10+!

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  • Antonio Liao (7/29/2009 1:37:00 AM)

    your great poet...my salute and vow of respect in the poem you share
    for the society of poet...a poem of reality......everything ends to begin
    again like a wild flower......the last line could be the last defense....i
    like it best...God bless...a 10 +++++

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  • Melvin BanggollayMelvin Banggollay (7/27/2009 11:40:00 PM)

    wala akong masabni kundi maganda at nakaka-inlove ang yong tula.

    I love you,

    melvin

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  • Noel Horlanda (7/25/2009 9:53:00 PM)

    This piece of work is lovely indeed, supposed to be wild but not literally, the creature was so very sweet indeed, sweet as a nectar. This also proved that the author is also so sweet as a wild flower like the lady in waiting. And with a feminine touch that is...

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  • Shashendra Amalshan (7/25/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    this is so beautiful isn't it.....
    i loved this one..
    beautiful one by a graceful sweet lady indeed! ! !

    with love
    shan

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (7/25/2009 8:46:00 PM)

    runs with depth...
    Lady grace becomes more mysterious to me...
    who is that Wild Flower? hope its me...(smile)
    In the middle of Mt. Apo...haha..
    I love this piece..meaningful..makes my brain dazzles..
    10+++++

    lovelots,
    Maia

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  • Eyan Desir (7/25/2009 2:27:00 PM)

    This poem makes me think
    It is not straight forward.
    It well written Gracy....

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (7/25/2009 2:54:00 AM)

    Great imaginative thoughts, turned into a beautiful poem.
    Well done.
    Thanks for sharing with me

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  • Ken E Hall (7/25/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    Nature has no supermarkets but everything is fresh and everything is hungry
    well done tale to the last line
    regards

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  • Alf Hutchison (7/23/2009 4:45:00 PM)

    Naughty monster! ! well done grace regards Alf

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  • Rafique Farooqi (7/23/2009 1:22:00 PM)

    Very decent poem.....well written

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  • Joseph Poewhit (7/23/2009 12:46:00 PM)

    The last line is very -----? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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  • Deborah CromerDeborah Cromer (7/23/2009 10:55:00 AM)

    Very creative and naturally deadly. Nicely arranged by thought. DC

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  • Subroto Chatterjee (7/23/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    A wild flower....a pitcher plant...venus fly-trap? Now, a honey-trap..
    Cheers.
    Subroto

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  • Lynda Robson (7/23/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    Great poem Grace, wonderful imaginative thoughts,
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Randy Hogan (7/23/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    Its not over! for to tomorrow the hunger will grow
    to the the point of must feed or be consumed...
    Is it me or is this poem a little naughty....
    anyways I love it
    Randy~*~

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (7/23/2009 7:54:00 AM)

    a black widow spider tale....
    oblique blends to direct....the simple flowers are scattered all over the worlds meadows.....not self aware...so to say
    dont know the naunces of the pout...the swaying rout...sometimes...just sometimes they turn out to be the venus fly trap.....snap an its over

    very nice lines.... a definite aspect of everyday life
    well written
    cheers

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (7/23/2009 7:22:00 AM)

    A different plant utterly against others' nature is wonderfully expressed in this poem!

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  • Luwi HabteLuwi Habte (7/23/2009 6:56:00 AM)

    nice expression buddy
    i love this one too
    Luwi

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