Rajeswari A V

Rookie (29-01-1984 / Kerala)

Will U Read My Story? - Poem by Rajeswari A V

I was once an empty pot
Desolate and so graceless
Choked with enormous load
Despite being waterless

Never worried to pay even a gaze,
Those who went past my spot
Being unaware of my ever-strong desire
To be cared and softly stroked

Once heard an odd foot step
That put a tremor down my void
And made my senses get up
And catch that vibrant voice

It was too divine and potent,
The spirited and the sweetest
To break up my rough shell
And to light up my dull soul

I wondered at this new bliss
The sense of a new birth,
The stunning soul of my own
And the very feel of being alive


Looking all around in amazement
With my sparkling dreamy eyes
I waited for the one who breathed
Priceless existence into my nothingness

I bore the sweet sentiment
In seeking the unseen,
Yet the fully heard being
Whom I loved to melt myself in


But, yet to meet and yet to melt
Yet to cease my quiet wait


Comments about Will U Read My Story? by Rajeswari A V

  • Ted M (6/29/2009 11:48:00 PM)

    You breathe life into lifeless things. Lovely stuff (Report)Reply

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  • Rajaram RamachandranRajaram Ramachandran (4/27/2007 8:43:00 PM)

    I read your story-they speak well of your talent. (Report)Reply

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  • Prasanna Kumari (9/22/2006 11:58:00 PM)

    your powerful words have the wondrful feeling of love melting in dream and reality (Report)Reply

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  • Kee Thampi (8/29/2006 1:02:00 AM)

    bore the sweet sentiment
    In seeking the unseen,
    Yet the fully heard being
    Whom I loved to melt myself in


    this Wonderful World made of wonderful gateway, here God blessed with a rose
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  • Kelly Allen Vinal (8/28/2006 6:58:00 AM)

    Wonderful piece of work, Raj (Report)Reply

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  • Dr John Celes (8/28/2006 5:51:00 AM)

    A lovely, emotional and inspired poem that truly captivates the reader's heart.
    love,
    Dr John Celes
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 28, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 28, 2010


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